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[The banana is mine]

So this is what your sig was from

Well it's short, and not that well animated or humorous. But good start in drawn animation.

Guidodinho responds:

Well. It IS funny........if you're on something :p

[Rainbows R Gay]

Hilarious

This was great in both humor and animation. At first i thought it was gonna be some preachy "stop listening to stereotypes" thing but this was great!
Great voice acting nice quality and effects. I also recognize a Kirby song in the credits.
Good job

[Hulalaoo Gif]

Nice frame by frame

Once again, you just keep on improving. I would love to see you make a clean final animation from this. Colored, and everything. Very smooth and very well animated. Not too stiff but not to sketchy.

[Metroid: Bioweapons]

Great humor

It was actually pretty funny.
Especially the "We don't have any enemies, the only enemies are our own failed bioweapons". There are the space pirates though.
Well anyway. The reason you get a 5 is because of the poor animation. Try to rely less and less on Tweens. Tweens aren't bad but relying too much on them gives poor results. Especially on Samus. That running animation she did was TERRIBLE. Also her coloring would have been better with simple colors instead of gradients. Even though it is metal armor she's wearing it's VERY flexible (it can turn into a BALL), so it's better to give it humanoid movement instead of Inverse Kinematics.

[Xionic Madness 3]

Alright alright

You won madness day....chill!

[The Lint Trap]

You wash and wash

BUT YOU CAN NEVER REMOVE THE SIN!

[Madness Confliction]

Great improvement

Your animation has become A LOT cleaner, no more nasty squiggly lines and disproportionate bodies. You did good, massive improvement. Only error was i felt you stalled a lot (i guess the more effort on keeping the lines good caused you to need a break lol) and the mask on the clowns Error mode, you can see the beginning and end of that blurred image you used for his skin, i dunno if you were going for it but it looked wrong. Well that's it for this i guess..

[Akatsuki Game Night!]

I enjoyed it.

As much as i detest naruto, i liked it. Work on your animation more, maybe get some voices in their and you'll be getting somewhere.

[Sonic 15th Thr33]

That was terrible.

I hate when people try to be funny and you know what they do? Nothing. They just take clips from another show or song and just animate crappy mouths about it. As if spriters weren't bashed enough for being unoriginal. And sadly the jokes that actually seemed to be your own idea were terrible. It was incredibly long for no reason. Brevity is the soul of wit, and speaking of wit, this had none. Most of the jokes were old anyway the clips being used many times in many flashes before. You only get cudos for using Monty Python but i wont be biased from a lovely show and give you a better review for it. You even over used an over used screaming sound clip from MK. Seriously, did originality ever hit you on the head when you were making this? I honestly did not finish it, i couldn't bare more of this crappiness.
The animation was decent, not enough to bring your score up, plus there was barely anything funny with the visuals all of the humor came completely from the audio clips you used. The talking was literally 1 pic of a badly drawn rectangular mouth just blinking whenever someone talks. It honestly looked like you didn't put a single bit of effort into the writing or animation.
Next time, try to be ORIGINAL with the jokes, and put more effort into the animation. You didn't even try to make the delivery of the jokes good enough to make up for all the rest.
You get a 1 for effort.

RicPendragon responds:

I'll reply to this on your stomping grounds.

[what is this i dont even]

Wha?

Huh? What's going on here, hey who's there. What is this, you damn kids and your music!

Short-Factor responds:

yeah damn them